Tuesday, 17 December 2013

Feedback for Review (2nd draft)





































Strengths:

  • The colours are appealing
  • Good colour scheme used
  • Layout and content is very good
  • Well used in line text
  • Decent photo used
  • Content is professional sounding

Weaknesses:

  • Too much analysis about the film
  • Too short
  • Too many colours are used, they don’t complement each other
  • Caption should be better for the photo and relevant to the story.
  • Age certificate is not official and it should be in the title

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